Curse

kduv889 · May 01, 2006, 05:54 PM // 17:54

Hello everyone, this is KDUV889, i previously posted that i was creating a Novel for a School assignment, and i chose to use the Guild Wars game as my plot. I want to share with you all my first chapter and a VERY quick outline of the chapters after. I would love to have your feed back, especially on the proper Nouns of NPC names and outpost/town names. please feel free to Email me if you need to further share advice or comments, i will be looking on here for your comments as well. thank you again for all the posts on here that have helped me to sort out what i want to do here. let me remind you that my story does not exactly concure with the story line of Guildwars, for the sake of not using plagerism (sp). i dont know how many posts i will have to use to post the whole outline, as it took 3 pages on MS word.

kduv889 (look below for the outline)

kduv889 · May 01, 2006, 05:55 PM // 17:55

There is a land where the heroes and the citizens live in harmony because of the help which both bestow upon each other. It is a land where evil is little known and not brought up into conversation. This land is known as Tyria and many different types of people and animals live within it. In current days, a great city, known as Ascalon has been struck with travesty. The blood thirsty ones known as the Charr have invaded this once beautiful and peaceful city and caused the whole land to become ugly and vulgar. The land of Tyria would be affected by this great travesty in Ascalon in a great way that would trigger the Flame Seeker Prophecies and thus, begin this story.
In the land of the Northern Shiverpeak dwarves, King Jalis Ironhammer rules over the ones who protect the lands from the Stone Summit Hand. A little known warrior, Yabo Shlivenberg, in a settlement near the Ice Tooth Cave, has been in route to Ascalon since the news of the Searing of Ascalon reached the area. Yabo has warned King Jalis Ironhammer of the threat that lingers within Ascalon and made sure that the King be ready for Ascalon refugees in transit. Yabo was not known to be a coward because of the lessons that his great and mighty father, Ronlivoch Shlivenberg taught him since he was a “wee” little boy. Yabo has planned to meet up with Sister Mun Tai as soon as he enters the Ascalon city. He faces a semi-long journey ahead to reach his destination but vows to overcome all hardships in order to help those he calls friends.
Yabo has reached Yaks Bend, which at the moment is cold and empty of settlers.
“ I do expect this place to be over flowing with Ascalonians soon, but I hope not to see them in distress. I hope ‘te’ find the ‘wee’ ones in good health as well. I find little time to stop and think of such ‘lil’ travesties ahead.” Yabo sighed from exhaustion of his journey to Ascalon. “Where be that ‘john’ I must relieve myself before my continuing journey. Oh to hell, I’ll use that bush.”
Soon after, Yabo returns to his journey and puts the skills that he learned from Master Togo in the days behind him, to great use.
“I tell ‘ye’, maintaining this mending against these Mergoyles uses quite a bit of my energy, oh hell.”
Once out of the travelers Vale, Yabo found himself dealing with a greater deal of Hydras and Stone Furys than he had anticipated.
“You shall not stop me oh evil Stones and hydras of Grenth, I shall over come you!” Yabo casts Mending and immediately after, shouts ‘Shields Up!’ for the win.
We Stone Furys will see your power and shake you with our earthquake, little human!” The battle rages with fire in Yabo’s eyes and determination in the Lodestones of the Furys.
Now nearing the Northern Wall, Yabo makes hast to find Ambassador Kain who would tell him of the Travesties that have taken place since post Searing. He pondered as he sprinted nearer to the Ambassador, “How sad it makes me to see such a beautiful land struck with ugliness, I can barely make out the details of my childhood here, as I visited often.” Again sighing while just around the corner from the Ambassador, Yabo catches his breath.
“Hello heroic one, I have heard far and wide of your arrival to Ascalon City, you are well known here, and many appreciate the help you bring to our aide. You will find food and shelter within the ruins of Ascalon and much wisdom from Brother Mhenlo in the Sanitarium South of me. Please take this time to rest my friend, as your journey to save Ascalon, and possibly the kingdoms of Tyria is only beginning.”
Yabo came to attention as the wisdom of the Ambassador was released unto Yabo’s ears and absorbed. Now he enters into Ascalon to await his childhood friend of Cantha, Sister Mun Tai.
n Outline of further chapters –
n Ch. 2 Yabo and sister meet and take about the journey ahead.
n Ch. 3 Yabo and sister make for the Sanitarium for wisdom of Mhenlo and speak with the locals there
n Ch. 4 Journey to Northern wall to stop the charr and meet up with Prince Rurik
n Ch. 5 Yabo and Sister meet in the Nolani Academy to get to Yaks bend
n Ch. 6 The group meets up with Myriam of Lockdale a mesmer of greatness, and talk with the Ascalon settlers who have reached yaks
n Ch 7. Group helps the deldrimor dwarves with the stone summit and travel back to Ice tooth cave with hast.
n Ch. 8. meet up with Uzumaka Yuzara a ranger of poison, in ITC.
n Ch. 9. travel south to beacons perch to help the Ascalon refugees continue passage to the Gates of Kryta.
n Ch 10. meet with the white mantle and ask for passage into Lion’s Arch, the new home of the Ascalons.
n Ch. 11. group rests in LA and talks with the town folk there. Meets up with Valoria Rivinta and discusses plan ahead of them
n Ch. 12 makes hast to Temple of Ages to look for the favor of the gods, so that their morale can maintain high.
n Ch. 13. travels to Divinity coast and goes in transit to Druid’s overlook and to pay resprect to the Avatar of Dwayna.
n Ch. 14. group rushes to Quarrel falls to deal with the White Mantle and side with the Shining Blade
n Ch. 15. group makes a stop in the Maguuma stade to recover from the maguuma spiders and their poison.
n Ch. 16. meet up with Ritualist Naga to learn of the way of Spirit calling in order to make it to riverside, talks with Old man Jones and departs from Naga there after.
n Ch. 17. group sneaks past mantle near the riverside providence in order to make it to Sanctum cay
n Ch. 18. Group learns new skills at the skills trainer in Fisherman’s Haven to help them deliver a rare item to Vizier Kilibraun
n Ch. 19. group uses the help of Assassin Troy to make safe passage to the boat with the vizier so that they may find last hope of saving Ascalon and now kindom of Tyria from destruction as told in Flame Seeker Prophices, as told by Vizier Kilibraun.
n Ch. 20. Group makes it Amnoon Oasis and travels around is major hast to ascend and find the gods favor in divine light. Assassin troy has left the group at Amnoon.
n Ch. 21 group ascends and returns to Ascalon to destroy the charr invasion.
n Ch. 22. Yabo receives horrible news of his settlement and must return. All other too, are now in danger in their home areas as the Litch as releases fire demons in their areas. Valoria Rivinta takes up the greatest task, killing the Litch, with Hired help of the henchmen.
n Ch. 23. Valoria Rivinta travels to the fire Islands with only the hope that she finds in the Gods favor.
n Ch. 24. Valoria rushs to the litch area and fights for the freedom of Tyria
n Ch. 25. Litch is dead and Valoria is killed in an explosion on Fire islands. Yabo finds news of this after a week and travels on to find out how this happened. In transit yabo is jumped by Azure Shadows and kills by the evil within the icy land. Who will save the tyrian kingdoms from the Titans who roam the lands of Tyria now, Tyria is in grave danger now.
n After math Ch. – Canthan characters sale to Lion’s Arch, as Mhenlo tells of a grave danger that Krytan area faces and asks for the help of those who were taught well my Master Togo. A second Novel would pick up here as a follow up to the first novel.

Robin_Anadri · May 13, 2006, 07:53 PM // 19:53

Just a note about the burning (non-titan) effigies in Old Ascalon - I thought they were likenesses of the Lich.